tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-916057027439235811.post7247889178089619541..comments2023-04-18T05:36:51.069-07:00Comments on Bree Rodriguez's AP English Lit & Comp Blog: Essay #1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17614203210347833732noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-916057027439235811.post-14641983194859806672014-08-14T17:01:44.974-07:002014-08-14T17:01:44.974-07:00Okay thanks!Okay thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614203210347833732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-916057027439235811.post-65992078720190795312014-08-13T21:45:21.042-07:002014-08-13T21:45:21.042-07:00I really liked your essay, especially since you di...I really liked your essay, especially since you did a character i haven't seen analyzed yet. The one thing you could improve in this essay would be to extend the second half of your thesis, the part when you say it was enriching as well. maybe give an overview as to how it enriched Ruth May. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07112327406868136495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-916057027439235811.post-79541530819744464202014-08-13T21:17:57.906-07:002014-08-13T21:17:57.906-07:00Great advice! Thanks for the feedback :)Great advice! Thanks for the feedback :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614203210347833732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-916057027439235811.post-50743096666793436122014-08-13T19:56:33.122-07:002014-08-13T19:56:33.122-07:00Good job. You answered the prompt with evidence fr...Good job. You answered the prompt with evidence from the book and from your thoughts. Try to incorporate how these experiences left a lasting effect on Ruth May, changing her character or ideas of the world. Nice first essay back. LizAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13662997098552735481noreply@blogger.com